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Re: A Moment of Healing
I think it's lovely. As it is it's a great piece, but it would be really awesome if you could put a line or two in the beginning to set ...
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Re: Reunion
I like complex rhyme schemes... Its: ABABCCDDD and the last line is repeated in every stanza.
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Re: Vampire
Maybe rhyme crypt with ripped or dipped?
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: I'm here, I'm wierd
I got an email and I actually expected it to take longer. Then I registered and I'm loving it. Three pleasant surprises in two days, (I saw Xanadu the musical ...
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: delete
I'm one of the editors of my school's literary magazine, and we get a lot of what seem to be the two antagonists of this thread, bad rhyming poetry, and ...
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: Death and Forever
I got the title from another poem by somebody famous. It was on a test, so I was not able to write it down and I forgot it. P.S. This ...
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: What Makes a Good Girl Character?
I have found that, as a guy, It is best to imagine female characters by themselves, without making any comparisons to male characters at all. They should be confident, but ...
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: I'm here, I'm wierd
Hello all, I had a bit of a saga getting signed up. 60-page error messages after I clicked registration. ...But that's all behind me. My first love was poetry, preferably ...
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: Reunion
He got a bachelors degree from brown university and talks about it like he graduated a little while ago and still has his whole life ahead of him. He calls ...
Jul 13, 2007 -
Re: Reunion
Wrote this with memories of a visit from my grandfather, and my high school class as a whole. Reunion A woman casually apart, Half sleeping with her stockings gone Reliving ...
Jul 13, 2007
