Rhiannon

Thank you so much everyone. Especially Incognito Temptation I really appreciate all the detail you went into in you critique it'll help me improve this drawing (and probably a lot ...

So what do you guys think? :D (This is NOT some of my bet work, but I think it turned out ok...... ish.

Wow... really just... wow. This picture is... amazing! The head seems a bit flat (though that may just be me), the lips aren't quite centered, and the right eyebrow seems ...

Okay, for saying you've never tried drawing before... this is great! The eyes aren't too big, but I think you could reduce their length a little bit. Also the shoulders ...

I love this picture!!!!! :O The way you did the feather's is AMAZING!!!! and you did really well with the folds in the clothes! I'm also impressed by the detail ...

Ok, let me start by saying I LOVE how you did the shading in this picture! I looks really good. :D Second I love the kimono's design!

Well to me it looks like you're off to a good start with the whole shading thing, But I recomned not shading it so darkly. LIke try to do it ...

I really like how well you were able to do the side prfile of the face, but the hair seems kind of stiff in my opinion, and were you trying ...