Rhiannon

I JUST finished that book last night! I am so in! :D Name: Roxanne ViRaven Appearance: petite/slender with long bronze hair typically tied up in a ponytail to keep in ...

Thank you soo much for all of your opinions!! I'm glad to see some of it was liked and the ways that I can improve it! :3 I'm glad the ...

So umm... this is the second story that I've posted up here, granted I never finished posting my first one, but so many people seemed to have lost interest in ...

Thank you so much everyone. Especially Incognito Temptation I really appreciate all the detail you went into in you critique it'll help me improve this drawing (and probably a lot ...

So what do you guys think? :D (This is NOT some of my bet work, but I think it turned out ok...... ish.

Wow... really just... wow. This picture is... amazing! The head seems a bit flat (though that may just be me), the lips aren't quite centered, and the right eyebrow seems ...

Okay, for saying you've never tried drawing before... this is great! The eyes aren't too big, but I think you could reduce their length a little bit. Also the shoulders ...

I love this picture!!!!! :O The way you did the feather's is AMAZING!!!! and you did really well with the folds in the clothes! I'm also impressed by the detail ...

Ok, let me start by saying I LOVE how you did the shading in this picture! I looks really good. :D Second I love the kimono's design!

Well to me it looks like you're off to a good start with the whole shading thing, But I recomned not shading it so darkly. LIke try to do it ...

I really like how well you were able to do the side prfile of the face, but the hair seems kind of stiff in my opinion, and were you trying ...

O.O Wow... I totally love how this seems to be turning out. It's so intense yet light-hearted at the same time. I'm kind of confused though, if they broke up ...

Well... They ^^^^ nit picked everything out, and I can't think of much else. I agree that a few of the phrases you used were really confusing, and I had ...

Chapter three “Y-you can’t be… how is that even possible?” Rosalyn nearly screamed in terror. “Just forget about it, Rosalyn,” Alexander sighed, wishing he hadn’t said anything. “B-but

It was only a sliver carving into the sky. I thinks "It was only a sliver carved into the sky." might have worked a bit better, mostly because the wording ...