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Rhea

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Betrayal

    This poem could be so good it made my brain explode. I agree with the girl above me that The pain turns to sadness And then it grows to anger ...

    Aug 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Thoughts Untold-redone

    I think it needs to be broken up a bit. It reads too much like one long sentence. I think it help immeasurably if you read your poem out loud ...

    Aug 27, 2007


I want to shake off the dust of this one-horse town. I want to explore the world. I want to watch TV in a different time zone. I want to visit strange, exotic malls...I want to live, Marge! Won't you let me live?
— Homer Simpson