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Exhausting and sleepless here comes the illness to take away control to allow the reckless storm to dance here comes death, the desire for it for an allied sweet escape ...

I must disagree with coral I like the repetition of the 'wooden box' it's a significant part of the style of your poem. It is true that you could be ...

The beauty exists no deeper than the skin Between the cracks of perfect pores, tears swell in darkness Behind parted, curved and twisted red Beyond pretentious disguise While emotion remains ...

Wow, this struck a cord with me, I was kicked out of home about 18 months ago leaving behind my younger brother and sister both believing that I would infact ...

You've done well writing this piece after experiencing such a thing, you've expressed your emotions well. Overall a confronting, powerful and beautiful poem for your friend.

I really like the simplicity of your lyrics, they're innocent and expressive. You can gradually develop it as you grow and have new ideas, a good start.

A powerful piece. I think the title suits perfectly, seeking strength, lacking it and gaining it.

You're on to something here, the way in which you describe drugs as deceiving demons is fantastic and expresses the darkness that can be drug addiction. Your poem has a ...

This poem is lovely. Beautifully written, peaceful flowing and cute (for want of a better word). I really like what you've done with warmth : sun-blazed pleasantly warm fingers The ...

I was reading through some old books the other day and found some lyrics similar to these that I had written about 4 years ago. This is were it all ...

For Esther: Australia is pretty Cool I love it, you should definitely come over and explore. I enjoy anything thats hard to figure out or that has a billion different ...

This is amazing, frightening and beautiful. You've captured birth, fear and life perfectly and you're descriptions create a fantastic imagery when read. just beautiful.

I absolutely love this! Very clever rhymes and an overall entertaining piece. love the 'yellow limo's' haha. you've done well putting it all together it's consistently brilliant, would love to ...

Hey everyone. I'm from Australia I'm 18 and I just joined today. I am female but can't quite figure out how to change my profile settings yet (please help). I'm ...

I like it :) a very simplistic poem, cute. Perhaps though to contrast the lightness of heaven go deeper into the threat of tumbling to hell below. there are temptations ...