Reyu

*sigh* I do miss TYWC. It should become a book >< Long live YWS! (I do look forward to it's rebirth though)

I don't want this to sound rude, but you can't just accept a critique can you? :?:

Back in the day Nate made a post... I read it. I think I signed up on day two >

This is the beginning of Claire and mine's second joint novel. The rest of chapter one will be posted when we've written it... Chapter One Mr Pailey looked upon his ...

Who Art Thou? Who art thou that prowls passageways at dusk? Garbed in a white gown with white slippered feet. No trace left at dawn but a perfumed musk Of ...

Hello again, my friend. I see that you have made several changes and it is improved but some of the comments I made on the other piece are still relevant ...

John Donne... :roll: That aside, very cool and made me chuckle 8)

*BumP* This is the story that people should be reading. Not my rough drafts :)

I'll make this short and sweet. I have to agree with a few others, you're telling the story, not showing it. I know you say it is just the beginning, ...

Hi there. Just a few little suggestions my friend... It has been made more powerful than any sword has a right to be , through crushed prayers, betrayal, and tears ...

So, all I can see is: Will and when will we be seeing more? :o I've been looking forward to it for a while now. I concur!

Hey Reyu, im totally amazed at the fact that my account is still active! though i tried to get on to my old old account but it was gone! i ...

I got to 4 *disappears*

First, your formatting is making the post kind of huge, but that's not a huge issue. o.O By all laws of the human mind they should have had me completely ...

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