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This poem seems sort of empty. To me, it has no lasting effect on the reader, and the phrases are rather clichéd. The last stanza also completely changed perspectives - ...

Well as much as I appreciate all of your comments, I think I agree with Incandescence and DargquanQl'Deleodna. I think I'm going to take a break from poetry. Not because ...

Hello Sam - Thank you very much for your reply. I appreciate all your comments. About the what you said about the dates, I agree with you - but this ...

I think this is a really good poem. It gets its message across very effectively. This is one of the most heartfelt poems I have read in quite a long ...

Solitude Come to my heart with a mask of purple, gold and green, come with your twisted candlestick smile, come with kisses and lies and wilted roses and maybe I ...

HEAT Our souls were famished. The war had dried them all out. We suffered through four years of pain and now its all over. We are happy now. Finally, after ...

Hmm, in general this poem seems sort of clichéd to me. Alot of the phrases, like 'Two souls entwine' or 'Two hearts become one' in specific felt rather clichéd. Also, ...

I liked this. Like Snoink, I thought it had a very honest and heartfelt feel to it. Your writing skills are beautiful, and your sentences and paragraphs are well structured. ...

Oy, I'm reading King Lear too... it's a requirement for school. Oh. The joys. ^_~ We're performing King Lear at my school in January. It's so much fun, and it's ...

Breathe Raw and beautiful I take in a breath of ripe air and slowly release it out through my mouth. Somewhere a distance away you do the same, apart from ...

Wonderful blue sky, Parachute fly high up through The Clouds of freedom. I don't think the line 'wonderful blue sky' really fits in with the rest of the poem. That ...

I really did like this poem. It has wonderful imagery and beautiful ideas. My only suggestion is to maybe space it out into stanzas, just because it's easier for a ...

Hi green_river, It's always reassuring to see somebody can elaborate on a definition. They are not, however, poets, and this is not, in fact, a poem. Shrubs are not awakened, ...

I like this, Brad. Very useful, and very truthful too! Thank you for sharing.

I read this book! I thought it was really good, too. I can't wait for more from Khaled Houssini.