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Oh, to touch her hand again. To see her smile. To kiss her gray head. Simple things I felt I’d always have Though I knew better And when the better ...

Wow! You're really good at that. I have absolutely no idea how it works (I'm not very smart with things like that). But anyways, I get why your name it ...

I agree, this is really beautiful. I don't have anything for you to improve - Cicero and Shriek touched on anything I might've considered. I also really like the character ...

This should be rated R for use of the f-word. Also please capitalize your 'I's'. Additionaly, I think you should take out the lines through some of the words, the ...

How do you write a poem? What is your technique? Can you write a perfect poem in ten minutes, or does it take you a month of revising? Do you ...

Areida - [You asked about what I meant at the end of the third stanza.] I think I'm confusing you just at the end. The word 'origin' doesn't have any ...

Yes, I'm back into writing poetry again - I've spent a long time reading other poetry, perfecting my style, and editing this poem. I hope it's better than my last ...

I happened to notice that eveyone who has commented on this little piece thus far has been "male". So, with that fact in mind, I'd like to pose a question. ...

I haven't reviewed poetry recently, but I had to for this one. I love this poem. It is brilliantly crafted and expressed, and there is nothing (in my opinion) to ...

Actually does someone know how to resize it a bit smaller? :oops:

I like the style of this piece. I like the short, quick and sometimes interrogative dialogue. Your dialogue really sets a tone for this - its some of the most ...

I think I get what you mean. I don't like when we get to choose our books for a book report, because when you have to do all the analyzing ...

In art class we had to paint a painting in the style of a member of the Group of Seven. This is in the style of Tom Thompson. Ya, it's ...

We SERIOUSLY need to start a vegetarians club here or something... there are so many of us! :D That school of yours sounds pretty awesome, too! We didn't have anything ...

Thank you, trident! Dolores is supposed to be a neighbour of Dorothy's. I knew that in my head, but I guess I forgot to write it in. Hehe, that last ...