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All that remained from previous stores around it were debris composed of broken bricks, signposts, shards of glass, and a few trees still straddled the backyards. The last part of ...

Rowen sounds to me like a character from a fantasy story. She would be strong and brave, but feminine as well. She sounds like she is young - between 16 ...

Hi Myth, I thought this was a really well written character sketch. I can get a good sense how these characters act and think, and would like to see more ...

August - No, I wouldn't say so - not anymore, at least. From everything I've experienced, I can say for sure that nothing is absolute, and nothing is completely black ...

If any of you remember, Distance was the last thing I've written, which was in December. I haven't written anything the past few months since then because of our play ...

I'm probably wrong, but to me it sounds like a science fiction story, possibly involving cloning. Maybe I'm looking at it too literally. Undercurrent

Welcome to YWS, Rasi. I'm sure you'll like it here - we're pretty friendly. Have fun!

We got our stories back today, and I got a 94%. I'm pretty happy with my mark; it's about what I would've expected. The strange thing is, though, on the ...

Fun mirrors make you Dance and hop slowly, Unsure of how to control The waves and bumps with Their clumsy, sleepy, fingers. Your wording seems a bit off in this ...

Thanks for replying, Cass, I do appreciate it more than you might think. All your suggestions make sense, and you pointed out a lot of things I didn't notice before. ...

Wow, those are really beautiful photos. I especially like the second one, with the lady bug. I don't think the last one is all that bad - it's just as ...

One thing I wanted to point out was, the creature, having been transported from where it came, was, in my opinion, rather calm about the situation. Is it not confused, ...

DISTANCE “Come in, come in, we’re just getting started.” Camilla held open the back door of the S&M Institute of Scientific and Technological Research. Sangha and his great grandson, Makata, ...

Here is one from King Lear. I don't think this is the original, but whoever edited it didn't do such a great job: "There's a division betwixt the dukes; and ...

I must say, I really really like your style in this piece, and your use of language. The setting description is good too; I can see it clearly in my ...