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Well, I'm not really big on rhyming in general, but I thought your rhyming was actually pretty good. The rhythm gets kind of repetitive, though, and it got kind of ...

If you have more, you should post them. Okay, here goes ... (shakes as he has big expectations to live up to) Bird Innocent songbird your notes pierce the tumbling ...

Well, there's two explanations for mine. One is just because green is my favourite colour and water is my favourite element. The other would be because green is the colour ...

Beam.

I thought that was absolutely beautiful. When you read it, you can almost feel as if you've been to this island before, like its a part of you. Your imagery ...

The river is flowing drifting and blowing it carves its way through earth and trees, continuing to make beautiful tangled webs sitting atop the land. The leaves overhead lean inwards ...

My life is Like a thousand piece puzzle Every day with Themes that never stay The same. Sometimes the colors are Dark and the picture violent While other times, Bright ...

Blessings Take my hand boy ... Feast your innocent eyes On the lives of others Overall, I thought this was a very good poem, with a good meaning. Although, I ...

xanthan gum, you amaze me! I've read other poems you've written on the forums and they're absolutely brilliant! This one was definately no exception. Keep writing, please!

Here are some haikus I have written, let me know what you think! Clouds - Oh those bumbly clouds their subtle sense of humour mocks how we worry. Tree - ...

my favourite poet would definately have to be Michael Ondaatje, and my favourite poem of his is The Cinnamon Peeler. I don't really have it with me now, so I ...

Wow, that is a really good poem! I really like your use of imagery, it's very powerful. Honestly, I don't think theres anything I would change. Good work, and keep ...

Though I don't write poetry more than prose myself, I like haiku. It's a wonderful way to have to be concise in imagery. If you have any questions about me ...

I am whole. The guiding palm of the Ultimate Reality has unclenched my hesitant eyes and released me into a world of pure clarity. The warmth of It's knowledge resonates ...

Wow, I really enjoyed your friend's poem. One thing I would change is the repetition of the word tendrils. 'it's tendrils swirl', 'those tendrils wrap', 'the tendrils bind' gets too ...