Revere

I decided to change from 'green_river' to 'Revere'. I needed an update, though I'll keep it simple by not changing it again 8).

Hey gadi, I liked this - it was fun to read and and it really does flow beautifully. I can't find any specific things to rearrange, but I do have ...

I actually have a question of my own... What exactly does an Instructor do? Are they assigned one person to instruct or do they just have to critique everyone's work? ...

Always good to meet new members! :P My real name is Eric, and I've been posting off and on here for almost two years. I keep coming back because, like ...

Nice to meet you, Audy: 8) I do think you have some good ideas in this. You could take this and develop it into a strong poem - you just ...

TEMPERATURE DROP ~ The temperature outside was falling quicker than ever, almost doubling the speed of the Cyclone’s descent. A chill dove through Harry Guy Traver’s back, but before it ...

You have some wonderful imagery in here: every line makes a wonderful picture. It flows really well, and your line breaks and stanzas all worked well where they are. As ...

Great article, Sam! There's a lot of really helpful, well-thought out advice in this. And it's all very true! Definately a new resource for me while character drafting. >GR

I need to come back to this topic more often - it was resting right on page seven of the Writers Corner boards ... Anyway, I've finished a short story ...

I'm back and posting again: I was off from a long bout of uninspiration to write. I've already been doing some critiquing, and I hope to do more soon. Don't ...

Hello, This was a very interesting read for me! Usually non-fiction reports make me sleepy, but this clearly presented the facts in a pleasing way, and I could tell it ...

Hey alleycat, You have a great idea for a story here, and in total it was well presented and well crafted. Some sentences felt a bit rough, but the paragraphs ...

What a fun piece - I really enjoyed it lol. It was sort of violent at the end, but it fit in well with the tone of the rest of ...

BlackDove - Welcome to YWS, I'm sure you'll enjoy it here. The best way to get critiques of your stories is to critique others' writing often. If you do that, ...

I am now basically finished outlining for Undercurrent, so I can start writing the first draft once I reread all my outlines and see if I missed anything. It's sort ...