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Re: Death Is An Angel
Hey xxKittyKatxx! Loved it! Simply astonishing! Love the shortness to it which makes it beautifully written! But I do think you contradict the title with a line from you poem: ...
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Re: The Flower in You
Hey Yuriiko! I liked the idea of the poem but the poem itself was a bit shaky. If you tried to make it rhyme, I suggest you go over it ...
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Re: in the shadows
Hey screamandshout! Just wait a minute, need to dry the tears from my eyes (figuratively). It's so sad. But that's what I like about it-I'm not a big fan of ...
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Re: Don't remind me(previously titled idek)
Hey screamandshout! I really liked this poem. It's like one of those poems where 'I like him but does he like me' sort of. It was written quite well and ...
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Re: Rain
Hi AutumnSun! I liked the idea of this poem. It was written well which kept me interested. To me, it was a new style of rhyming that you introduced-that being ...
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Re: A Rich and Ugly World
Hey! I thought this was really good! The emotion you provoke from this poem is amazing! It has this kind of sadness to it but not entirely. I felt happy ...
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Re: Try being me
Hey MysticalBlood! I'm RepublicOfCoter and I'll be your reviewer! Tears come to mind when I read this. If only they came from my eyes rather than my mind. I am ...
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Re: Untitled
Hey personalinsanity! I quite enjoyed this poem. I have to agree with kingolions that the idea you bring forward isn't one a lot people would like but I do. It ...
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Re: Leaving
Hey AutumnSun! I enjoyed the idea of the poem but not the poem itself. I felt that it was lacking structure. The first stanza was a good length while the ...
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Re: The Night Sky
Yep, you're right rubberduck, with your comment on the last stanza. What I am trying to say here is that this person loves the night sky and hates the day ...
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Re: The lovers
Hi. After I read the first stanza I knew exactly what I was going to get-something slightly annoying. I didn't like the rhyming one bit; to me, it ruined the ...
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Re: Smile?
Hi colie18! I really enjoyed this poem! I have to totally agree with the message you are saying in this poem-I have to say that I'm guilty of doing that ...
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Re: In the memory of Deryn jones
Hi spy0h! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you can call me ROC. I'll be your reviewer today and HAPPY REVIEWING DAY! I'm sorry to say, but I really didn't no which way ...
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Re: Who I am
Hey nicchaos! I really enjoyed this poem! The length was well done!I loved how you introduced a good aspect of the person and then you said a contradiction. They really ...
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Re: I Am The Face In The Crowd
Hey kingolions! I really enjoyed this poem. May I just say, great work! It was nice and short and perfect length. Now, I don't usually like poems with stanzas with ...
Jun 27, 2010
