RepublicOfCoter

I had a bit of help for this one. Hope you like it. Love it, loath it, live it, burn it. ----------------------------------- I feel the light inside me dim, As ...

Hey kingolions! I am a keen reader of the Misfortunate Happenings Series and I do enjoy reading them. Like you stated in the beginning, some are hits and misses but ...

Hey artlover2227! Hopefully you remember me, I'm RepublicOfCoter and you reviewed one of my poems which I'd just like to say, "Thank You". Now to your poem. I like the ...

I've heard that a lot of you say that 'deafened' is a harsh word to use in that particular section, but that's the point. There are so many stars that ...

Hey Cap! Please tell your cousin that I quite enjoyed this little poem. It's nice and simple yet it describes harshness. Beautifully written and well thought. Claps for you! You ...

Hey Cap! I'm not quite sure what to make of this. It isn't bad yet it isn't good. It comes off as more as guidance of some sort. No spelling ...

Hey king! You continue to amaze me! I was so surprised at the ending-I love your twists and climaxes you have in your stories (unbelievable). At first, I thought it ...

Hey Cap! I have to totally agree with Snoik-very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very repetitive (one very for each Sometimes I feel/think used) Kind of annoying, ...

Hey, kingolions! Don't quite know what to say here. I wouldn't say it's one of your best poems yet not one of your worst *raises one eyebrow and looks up ...

Hey kingolions, You continue to better yourself with each new poem. I loved this poem! It gave off this nice serenity feel to it because you didn't use harsh words ...

Hey kingolions! This poem was as dull as dull can be. Where is the imagery? I mean, I've read your other work and that has some fantastic descriptions but this ...

Hey iheartbooks! I would have to agree with Calligraphy: the beginning of the poem was fantastic but it seemed to die down to much for my liking. It did pick ...

Hey jasminebells! I really liked this poem! It had something new to it that I hadn't read before! I totally understand where this poem is coming from. It was nice ...

Hey kingolions! I liked this poem. It was different to what I have read which was a relief. I was enjoying up until he got hit by a bus (which ...

Hey SwaggVicious! Like the username, I must say. I really enjoyed this poem. It had this danger, scariness to it mixed with a little bit depression :smt001. It was an ...