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Hey CaptianRandom (been while since I've used your entire name)! This poem was very touching. I just wonder who you wrote this for? If it's someone you like, they should ...

Hey Cap! Let's just say that I didn't quite like this poem; it was all over the place. The flow was very jagged and the rhyming was very harsh and ...

I forgot to mention in my review that you were my 75th review which earned my my third gold star! Thank you for giving me that opportunity! -ROC

Hey! I quite enjoyed this poem. It had very good imagery. It lacked in length and punctuation, so please extend it if you want. I like poems like this-depressing, despair, ...

Hey! I didn't mind this poem but it needs some work. The imagery is there but probably the flow is missing as well as a generally direction. It feels incomplete, ...

Hey. I really liked this poem. Simply fantastic! It has so much meaning and was written perfectly. At first I thought it looked a bit daunting by the length of ...

Hey! Welcome to another piece of the endlessness that we call YWS! Great to see new work, this one in particular. For a newbee, this is excellent! I really enjoyed ...

Hey. This was great! It started off wonderfully with good length. It gradually got better and better as I read further on. Beautifully written throughout and wonderful choice of words. ...

Hey. Amazing haiku! It was the first I have ever read but I have heard many in the past. You linked them beautifully and the words used were excellent. Great ...

Hey! I didn't mind this poem, it was a very good first attempt but I do believe that it needs some work to be done. First of all, it's one ...

Hey fiction903! I would have to agree with kingolions-it was an interesting poem. It isn't often that you stumble across these type of poems-some are hits while some are misses. ...

Hey SilentRain! I quite enjoyed this poem. The imagery you use is fantastic! Full of meaning and emotions. Descriptions were well thought and written with good use of words. I ...

Hey kingolions, I didn't mind this poem but I thought that it was a bit cliche-I have read many poems like this before. I'm not annoyed but just a little ...

Hey Cap! You should consider to start writing a blog. I suggest this because this really isn't considered a a poem. You have tied both a blog and a poem ...

Hey everyone! This another poem of mine. Didn't take long to write so if you don't like it, please review. Love it, loath it, live it, burn it. ----------------------------- I ...