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Hey retrodisco666! This poem was quite interesting! It really provoked a lot of emotion. It really did touch me-my heart stopped during the last stanza. It was amazingly written. I ...

Hey GagaBowie! I don't quite understand this poem? You really need to be more clear. It is full of metaphors and odd descriptions that it is really hard to follow. ...

Hey Elinor Brynn! I like the main idea of this poem but it wasn't written to the best of your abilities. It really needs to be rewritten or extending in ...

Hey y AkiKerosin! I'm breathless. Truly astonishing! I loved this poem. You've truly captured the terror of the child and the situation they are put into and transcribed them into ...

Hey Kyllorac! I quite enjoyed this poem! It brought up an interesting topic-how everything is the same/how everyone tries to be like each other. I would have to agree totally ...

Hey Marrzi! Wonderful! I really enjoyed this. It is an overused topic but it was well written. What you are talking about is so true! You write with so much ...

Hey blackbird12! I don't know if I really liked this. It was written well but it was all over the place. You describe so much about the girl that it ...

Hey Demeter! Nice! I liked it. It was very interesting. The idea was different because haiku poems are generally about nature (not saying that's a rule but more of a ...

Hey Hibiscus! Just give me a minute *turns around while saying 'OMG!'*. This poem was truly fantastic! I have reviewed quite a number of poems (82 to be exact) and ...

Hey Mortivore! What do you mean "not my best work"? I thought this was fantastic! I really loved this poem. I must say that this is one of my most ...

Hey CaptianRandom! Good idea for a poem-full of heart. I didn't like it. I thought that it was a good attempt for a new style of writing that you haven't ...

I've been preparing for this for ages! I'm planning to do 70 review today to get my fourth star! -ROC

Hey everyone! I know it's been quite awhile since I've brought you another edition to The Day Trilogy. This is the second part which has been gathering dust in my ...

Hey retrodisco666! I liked this poem. It brought a new idea of poem to YWS. As mentioned by many reviewers, you drifted away from the typical concept of stars being ...

Hey kingolions! I agree with everyone when I say that this is really deep, and full of emotion. The words and scenes you pictured were quite intense which I had ...