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Re: A day paridise....
Hey there lightningbolt! I'm the RepublicOfCoter but people just call me R.O.C. *offers hand out*. I do hope that you enjoy your time here on YWS and that you post ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: See No Evil, Hear No Evil, Feel No Evil
Hey Warrior Princess! I'm RepublicOfCoter (R.O.C.) and I will be reviewing you dramatic poem today! I thought it was excellent. Simple amazing! I loved how you kept the length consistent ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Way Out
Hey kingolions! I'm not sure what to say...I'm still wiping the tears from my eyes (there is none actually, but I am holding them back). This was by far, the ...
Oct 18, 2010 -
Re: My Very own mockingjay (not the book)
Hey there Cap'n! Now I haven't reviewed many pieces of Art and Photography but I'll give it a go... I thought that this sculpture is beautiful! You have truly captured ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: The Art of Nature
Hey everyone! This is my second haiku poem that I've written! I like writing them now. Do what you want with it - love it, loath it, live it, burn ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: As seasons go by...
Hey everyone! Thank you for your wonderful reviews! I do apologize but I did think that all my lines followed the 5,7,5 syllable rules. Unfortunately, as many of you have ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: As seasons go by...
Hey, everyone! This is my very first haiku poem so do what you wish with it! I'm not sure if I like it but that is why and I need! ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: The Truman Show (movie)
Hey rainbowbubble! I'm RepublicOfCoter (R.O.C.) and I will be reviewing your poem today. Before I begin, welcome to The Young Writers Society (YWS)! It is always great to see some ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: My Spot For You
Hey kingolions! I liked this poem! It was a bit different to some of your previous works so you are extending your ideas *pats on the back and hands a ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Until The Day I Die
Hey kingolions! I'm not quite sure if I liked this one? To me, it was that tad bit too cliche for me; you've written some poems of the sort before ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: What's In My Mind
Hey kingolions! What sort of place do I live in where there are no rubbish bins and nothing can burn? It's hell, I say so! Jokes. See? I always have ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Glass
Hey kingolions! I'm trying to find a rubbish bin but I can't find one! Jokes. I know, it must be getting annoying hearing these lame jokes at the beginning of ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Daytura in Wonderland
watchmeburn, I am totally agreeing with RedLeaf's comments full stop. MWAHAHAHA! -R.O.C.
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: A Single Bullet
Hey kingolions! I'm trying to burn it but the lighter wont work *gets frustrated*. Nah I'm just kidding. I liked this poem. I love the simplicity of it all. And ...
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: My Teacher
Hey CaptianRandom! I'm sorry. I'm still laughing. I know you don't like this teacher but throughout the entire "poem", I was constantly laughing! It is hilarious! I do have to ...
Sep 22, 2010
