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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Making the most of what?

    Hey Cap! I didn't quite enjoy this poem due to the fact that it is a block of text. Separating them and putting it into stanzas really helps create a ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Goodbye

    Hi, I'm RepublicOfCoter (people just call me ROC) and I'll be your reviewer for this piece. The very first thing I'd like to say is that I simply LOVED it! ...

    Jun 17, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Your Soft Blue Eyes

    Hey king! This poem was fantastic! I really enjoyed the way you described what the narrator was feeling and what he felt. The climax of the poem was the conclusion. ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: A Veiled Shell

    Thank you HorseradishCares, I am currently taking on the challenge to create a new unique phrase which is quite a difficult job without help. All I have right now is: ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Fire

    I quite enjoyed this as I totally understand what you talking about. Despite that, I feel that I have to agree with the points brought by StoryWeaver13. They main topic ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: As each minute passes by

    Hello there king! Yes, I am reviewing yet another one of your fantastic pieces of work. However, this piece didn't strike me as fantastic nor as enjoyable but more of ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: A Veiled Shell

    This is another of my poems that I made up in a couple of minutes. Live it, love it, loath it, trash it. What am I? Nothing but a veiled ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: I Shall Never Write For You

    Hey king, This particular poem I didn't quite enjoy. Unlike your other poems, this one didn't give of that feeling of dread and despair or, like your others, depression. It ...

    Jun 15, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Every Day and Night

    Hello, your majesty, May I just say, this is the best poem that I've read that you've written! I really enjoyed it! After reading a few of the other reviews ...

    Jun 15, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Life, Death, and Everything in Between

    Hey king! This is probably my second ever review so don't judge too harshly on what I'm about to say. I didn't quite enjoy this poem; I've read some of ...

    Jun 15, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: A Crying Flower

    I did this really quickly a bit ago. Trash it, but help me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The tears it bore, ran down its face. Disturbing beauty on it wake. I feel the ...

    Jun 14, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Of A Rose

    Hey, thanks for the help. Just so you know, I wrote this poem about a girl. Try look at it that way. I just wanted to see what people thought ...

    Jun 14, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Living Night (PART 1)

    This is a story I wrote quite some time ago and I've been wanting to share it with as many people as I could. Love it, loath it, burn it, ...

    Jun 14, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The World Is My Dream

    Hey there! If you don't know who I am, I am RepublicofCoter and I will be your reviewer today. As I was reading it, I felt as if something was ...

    Jun 4, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: What they are

    This is my second ever post. Enjoy! We sit there together, hand in hand, staring up at the sky. Your love and warmness, comfort and tenderness, like those flying by. ...

    Jun 3, 2010


Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal.
— William S. Burroughs