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Re: Making the most of what?
Hey Cap! I didn't quite enjoy this poem due to the fact that it is a block of text. Separating them and putting it into stanzas really helps create a ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Goodbye
Hi, I'm RepublicOfCoter (people just call me ROC) and I'll be your reviewer for this piece. The very first thing I'd like to say is that I simply LOVED it! ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Your Soft Blue Eyes
Hey king! This poem was fantastic! I really enjoyed the way you described what the narrator was feeling and what he felt. The climax of the poem was the conclusion. ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: A Veiled Shell
Thank you HorseradishCares, I am currently taking on the challenge to create a new unique phrase which is quite a difficult job without help. All I have right now is: ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Fire
I quite enjoyed this as I totally understand what you talking about. Despite that, I feel that I have to agree with the points brought by StoryWeaver13. They main topic ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: As each minute passes by
Hello there king! Yes, I am reviewing yet another one of your fantastic pieces of work. However, this piece didn't strike me as fantastic nor as enjoyable but more of ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: A Veiled Shell
This is another of my poems that I made up in a couple of minutes. Live it, love it, loath it, trash it. What am I? Nothing but a veiled ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: I Shall Never Write For You
Hey king, This particular poem I didn't quite enjoy. Unlike your other poems, this one didn't give of that feeling of dread and despair or, like your others, depression. It ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Every Day and Night
Hello, your majesty, May I just say, this is the best poem that I've read that you've written! I really enjoyed it! After reading a few of the other reviews ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Life, Death, and Everything in Between
Hey king! This is probably my second ever review so don't judge too harshly on what I'm about to say. I didn't quite enjoy this poem; I've read some of ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: A Crying Flower
I did this really quickly a bit ago. Trash it, but help me. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The tears it bore, ran down its face. Disturbing beauty on it wake. I feel the ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: Of A Rose
Hey, thanks for the help. Just so you know, I wrote this poem about a girl. Try look at it that way. I just wanted to see what people thought ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: The Living Night (PART 1)
This is a story I wrote quite some time ago and I've been wanting to share it with as many people as I could. Love it, loath it, burn it, ...
Jun 14, 2010 -
Re: The World Is My Dream
Hey there! If you don't know who I am, I am RepublicofCoter and I will be your reviewer today. As I was reading it, I felt as if something was ...
Jun 4, 2010 -
Re: What they are
This is my second ever post. Enjoy! We sit there together, hand in hand, staring up at the sky. Your love and warmness, comfort and tenderness, like those flying by. ...
Jun 3, 2010
