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Re: the withering flower
Hey Elinor Brynn! I would have to agree with most of the reviewers that it was an excellent poem but it felt that it was unfinished-perhaps extending it would fix ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Loves Curse
Hey itsaslowfade! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC. I LOVED this poem! I loved the rhyming which was excellent for your first post I presume? Excellent length, not ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Glass Wall
Hey Jeanette! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC. I liked this poem. I would have to disagree with ziggiefred-i loved the repetition, I though it made it what ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Breath me in
Hey AA. I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC. I liked the the rhyming of this song but it really lost its feel with all the spelling errors-you really ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Anime Chibi girl
Hey Yuriiko! This is my very first review of an art & photography piece. I thought this was so cute! Wonderfully drawn with good use of colour. If you were ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Looking up at the Starry Sky
Hey Yuriiko! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC! This is my first review of someone who I don't know so I'm a bit nervous. Now, I don't usually ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: WHAT!?
Hey Cap! I would have to agree with nova-you wouldn't classify this as poetry. I understand what you were trying to write but you submitted it in the wrong place. ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: I Am The Walking Dead
Hey king! I found this poem quite interesting and intriguing. I feel that it can bring forth a lot of conversation because of the way you write it so well ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: First Sight
This is not my work, this is my friend's so I take absolutely no ownership for this poem. However, I'd still like comments and reviews so I could pass it ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: Kaboom and there’s your decision.
Hey Cap! May I just say how much I enjoyed this poem. I totally felt what you were saying. It wasn't too long or too short. However, there were a ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: 3rd times the charm
Hey screamanshout! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC. I loved this poem! I thought it was simply amazing. It is nice and short, not dragging like others I ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: My Quotes
Hey Captain! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you may call me ROC! I'm relatively new to reviewing so don't judge to harshly on what I'm about to say. The first thing I ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Broken Fairytale
Hey Emely! Peanut19 took the words right from my mouth. Like I said in my last review of your other poem, you need to check spelling, punctuation and grammar. These ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Those Moments
Hey Emely! I'm RepublicOfCoter but you can call me ROC. I'll be your reviewer and, by the way, I'm new to YWS so I may be a bit rusty when ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Thoughts of Fascination
This is open for interpretation. I will change it after I've had some more time to look at it. Meanwhile, love it, loath it, live it, trash it. I walk ...
Jun 18, 2010
