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Hey kitrosemon13! I liked this poem to a certain point. The wording was well with great descriptive words. Now to the nip picks: I don't like the length of each ...

Hey spike71294! I didn't mind this poem but I felt that it was lacking something. I can't quite put my finger on it so sorry that I couldn't be of ...

Hey screamandshout! Amazing! Simply amazing! I didn't expect what happened in the poem. It was sad but that's why it was so good. The simplicity about it made it wonderful ...

Hey screamandshout! I liked this poem. For someone who wrote when they were 11 is pretty impressive :smt002 . The wording was done well and the choice of words was ...

Hey Cap! I'm sorry but I'm lost for words. I really don't know what to say? You've made some really good poems in the past and then you write this? ...

This took me awhile to write so please say what you think and I'll edit it later. REMEMBER: HAPPY REVIEWING SUNDAY . So, please, many reviews would be welcome. Love ...

Hey kingolions! I really enjoyed this poem. I like how you introduce the haunting voice at the start and the way you tell us about it. Beautifully written with, what ...

Hey Yuriiko! You still continue to blow me away! What an amazing piece! Everything was in perfect balance! You seem to be a dictionary and a thesaurus in one. It ...

Yuriiko, you continue to amaze me with your wonderful poetry! How? How can you think of these? They are simply wonderful! I wish I can just cuddle all these poems ...

Hey Yuriiko! This may be my first dramatic poetry review, so here it goes. I loved it! I wish there was a button that said 'Love this YWS'. It was ...

Hey Cap! I felt that this poem was all over the place-too many repeated words (use a thesaurus, go on microsoft word and search synonyms or go on and have ...

Hey Alainna! I'm RepublicOfCoter (ROC). I quite enjoyed this poem. Very nice choice of words and good use of description. I feel as if this poem could possibly be written ...

Hey Cap! I didn't mind this poem-good job on the stanzas, very well done (most of it). The descriptions were very well done and the choice of words were well ...

Hey screamandshout! I quite enjoyed this poem. I loved the rhyming and the nice calmness it gave off. The choice of words was excellent and it was perfect length-not short, ...

Hey King! Finally came around to reading this. I have mixed feelings with this poem. I enjoyed to an extent because it felt like a 'happy' poem, but at times ...