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Wow. There are only a few errors, which are just the ones the the previous reply-ers have mentioned, and it flows quite well. I really like this, the atmosphere seems ...

This was pretty cool, I like it. Other than a few rythym complications (which mosst everybody else has already told you about in earlier posts) I think it was relitively ...

You reveiwed my work so I'm returning the favor- and in this case I think I drew the longer stick. This is, woah... Woah... I don't think I can sum ...

Oh my god, this is really sweet and I couldn't help but be touched by the eloquency and the endearing qualities of this piece. I loved this. You have an ...

Okay this was quite possibly one of the funniest things I've seen on this site! I loved this so much, especially since I am writing a story centering Death. This ...

you know, minus the fact he killed himself. I figured he would've gunned down the other gaurds and the business man first.

This was really really good. :) and I liked the plot. Maybe a few more details about the character's past and how he became a hitman for hire? I still ...

The sky itself was tired. The atmosphere radiated a deep chill. Even with eyes closed, he could feel that the surroundings were grey and listless, drab, as if to strike ...

awwwwww. :) thanks Death. Renny Renners?

This was really sweet, and I loved the title. The title, knowing it, made the poem even better. The changes you made to it (as far as I can tell ...

Woah. That's really all I could say in response to this. I would copy and paste all the compelling or heart-wrenching paragraphs or images but I'd be retelling your entire ...

Woah. That was really awesome, and the bombshell of an ending really caught me off guard but it seemed like it suited the plot extremely well. Other than a few ...

Hey hey I just found inspiration for a prompt I abandoned in 6th grade. This is it, I know it's really rusty and could use a lot of work so ...

Wow, All I can say is wow. There were only small mistakes, like words meant to be plurals that weren't, but wow. Is there any more of this theme? A ...

Oh my god. This is one of those rare and amazingly dark, if I may say, ballads that I wish I could either hear more of this poem and or ...