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This was really good, I like it alot. :) It had a great and unconventional prose that captured me well! It showed the love but without being all lovey-dovey and ...

Wow. I don't think I can sum it up any better. Just... Wow. :)

Holy poetry prodigy. Although I didn't quite grasp the meaning I still loved it. The emotion was deep and striking and it grasped my right off the bat. The last ...

OH MY GOD the Chronicles of Ancient Darkness are my favorite favorite favorite books! You guys have read them all now haven't you? :)

thanks. Yes, I did read it over and when I have the time I plan to edit it.

Thanks Formslipper, I was aiming more for what people thought of the content but that's okay.

it seemed like a nice start, but a little bit general. I only have one editing tip- about your pay I have it her. The 'her' should be 'here' but ...

I'm trying to go for something to be in 'Featured Works' but I think that it needs more 'likes'....

Well then, thanks! :)

Yes, this is long. Yes, I haven't expanded on the main character. I aimed to keep her sort of an enigma for the meantime while I figured her out myself. ...

I liked the idea, of vampires not being the cutesy sparkly ones in pop culture, but I think the flow of the poem in general was too choppy. I'm not ...

Woah... This was really, very good. I hadn't expected this when I clicked on it and am glad I was wrong. The repetition of the second paragraph/stanza was great and ...

Wow! I really liked this! :D The sentence fluency really worked out well, and it was well written. As an uber-fan of Greek mythology I think you captured the idea ...

xD I really liked this. The mood was set immediately and carried on throughout the piece. The moment I started reading I somehow knew it would end something like the ...

*warning: this is a big segment to read in one sitting* Death stared at the girl, wide eyed with shock. Astonishment dripped down his spine like ice. “Well who the ...