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I think I agree with what Sassykat said earlier. I like it, the descriptions are good. But I don't connect with it like a poem usually does with the reader. ...

I don't have much to say other than this is an amazing poem with more conviction than I thought it would originally. The usage of J.R.R Tolkien's quote was just ...

Again, thank you all! This is way better reception than I thought I'd receive. I'll go back and add punctuation and whatnot, and maybe wrestle with my other poems to ...

Thank you! :) And I corrected it, I'll check with the punctuation and whatnot.

Okay, this is aimed more for emotion and images, not understanding. It is about the main character in my book Freshly Fallen at the climax. I will admit this is ...

This was really... really... really good. :D I only have one complaint, and that is of 'the other dude'. I think that other terminology would convey the feelings that the ...

Whether or not you wrote this a 'long time' ago, it's good. I liked the flow and the length of the stanzas, but my favorite one was the final. It ...

Thank you! :) I write by hand and then usually just write it up on my Mac, which has its' ups and downs when it comes to writing. I'll look ...

First of all, I am very very sorry about your friend. :( Secondly, you transformed your grief and sadness into a literary work of art. The raw emotion and turmoil ...

I really like this! It is dramatic and although it didn't exactly spell out what it was about (minus the title) it left it up to several interpretations.

This was a beautiful poem, and I'm very sorry about what happened. :( The way you word it trully shows the way you're feeling and I can give no tips ...

:D I was compared to Edgar Allen Poe... My day has been made. And as for where I got the inspiration, my friend and I used to play a game ...

Thank you all so much for your feedback and insights, oh and the compliments are nice too. :) Thank you guys!

This is so so so good in that capturing, sad way. I like it so much but it makes me a little sad. You so earned a follow from me. ...

Oh my god! this is so good! :D