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This was really dark, and I liked it. The mood was set from the very first sentence and continued throughout the entire passage. I think that it's remarkable that you ...

Thank you :) I can't thank you enough for the reviews and the input. I'm always thankful to listen to peoples' opinions and suggestions on my work. I'll try to ...

Well this is another half hearted poem I wrote when I was supposed to be taking my Algebra final. What can I say, I'm a word person. This was written ...

This was good, I mean really good. I could almost hear music to it, like this could be a song. To be honest I couldn't find anything wrong with it ...

Oh my god. This was unconventional but still so very very very amazing. Not only does this radiate with every word you've written, but you make it so able to ...

That sounds like a very deep experience for you, and the poem sunds even better with knowing that! :) Ad witht hose two lines corrected it flows oh so much ...

This was really pretty, I must admit. The prose was solid, the stanzas were of perfect length and beat, and it was easily understandable. The poem gave away what you ...

Well then.. Wow. As far as that prompt goes, the prompt of 'a maid at a desk forgetting names,' I can say you excelled at it. I really did like ...

Wow... And must I say again... Wow. This was amazing, and I'm honored to think you asked for advice. Well I must also say that this has gone above and ...

I really like this, it has a steady rhythm and is morbid. I expect that from you, and you lived up to that! :) You really should create an ACTUAL ...

All nitpicks have been previously picked at, so I can't say anything about this other than I really like it- and I don't like many really short story clips. :)

I really liked this, and how you keep it simple and humorous. It really relates to those of us that have a "boy who sits in front of us in ...

Oh I do quite like this. At first it reminded me of Star Wars (my version of a massive compliment) with the space/starship and the pods and almost Tatooine-reminiscent planet, ...

The lyrics were good, and the descriptions were present but also a little vague. That might have been what you were going for though. But the great thing is I ...

Oh I so agree and love this! It's so great! The first line and it's nonsense words hooked me in quite like Lewis Carrol- and I mean this every way ...