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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Sleeping Lovers

    Thank you all SO much! It means a lot to me.

    Nov 24, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Sleeping Lovers

    Thank you all :) I do agree with commment-er above ^ I'm not much off an 'action-type' romance person xP If I ever do write something like "romance" it leans ...

    Nov 24, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Sleeping Lovers

    The pre-morning air radiated springtime renewal. Birds barely sang, instead tending to their downy feathers and flitting after one another. If one cared to venture out into the minty dawn ...

    Nov 24, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: In Her Eyes

    This was definitely an interesting piece. I think it changed moods in the middle, going from a sort of melencholy (forgive my spelling) to a sort of anger/bitterness. It takes ...

    Nov 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Kill your darlings

    I found this witty and funny and I couldn't help but smile as you turned this into a poem a lot of us (YWSers) can relate to. :) The old ...

    Nov 24, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: An Ugly Girl

    This was a phenominal piece of work and I think this 'hits home' with a lot of people. People who have never gone through this seem to feel an dhurt ...

    Nov 24, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Have you ever met a YWSer?

    Yes... Indeed I have *cough cough (Confictura) cough cough*

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Only the Strong Survive (ch. 1- Angelo)

    Okay, here I go, this WAS inspired by X-Men but no, it is not the same. I've been told this several times. Anyway, This is not my best written work ...

    Nov 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: There are no tears

    I thought this was captivating and really quite good, and I think the images that they bring are creepy (in a good way, that is) and very clear. The prose ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: ES+GP (prolog)

    Thank you for thinking so :) Don't worry, all I have to do if tweak the name in chapter one and I'll type it up for YWS.

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: ES+GP (prolog)

    Nighttime’s cool whisper of a breeze came as a blessing from the heavens, cooling the sweat on the olive brow of her majesty the Queen. All throughout the day she’d ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: ES+GP (prolog)

    Nighttime’s cool whisper of a breeze came as a blessing from the heavens, cooling the sweat on the olive brow of her majesty the Queen. All throughout the day she’d ...

    Oct 11, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: ES+GP (prolog)

    Nighttime’s cool whisper of a breeze came as a blessing from the heavens, cooling the sweat on the olive brow of her majesty the Queen. All throughout the day she’d ...

    Oct 11, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Chasing Cars

    I thought this was actually pretty good, and the lyrics made sense while using words that (in my humble opinion) may have been used just to sound pretty. But that's ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Angel's Fall

    As for how I wrote this during an Algebra final... Well... Let's just say I wrote it and was editing it on the paper I was supposed to be showing ...

    Jul 12, 2011


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