Renn

I'd be eternally grateful for a review or two on anything relating to Freshly Fallen, which can be connected to this link. :) I will say though, your title (Feed ...

"Brave"

I'm sorry this is so long! It's just not long enough to be a full story, so it fits in here. This is my first real attempt at sci-fi, written ...

This was... interesting. And really good. It felt almost like a persuasive essay, but not forced, very natural. This is something people always seem to keep 'hush-hush' and say that ...

OhMaiJitterbugPalooza. This was really quite awesome. Although, I must say, the ending was a total rip off of another death-related chapter of mine. *cough cough* But yes, the other people ...

Well Confictura, you certainly have a way with words. :) Thank you, -Renn and flattery does not become you after a while. Just, say something mean already!

I liked this, and it sounded like how you talked- when you get in your philosophical moods. So, to start out with, I think this is good- with a lot ...

Again, thank you! :)

Thank you so much Sassykat! I appreciate the corrections, and once I get the time (homework is wretched) I'll edit it as you see fit. :) Fondly, -Renn

D'awww! thanks! I'll correct it and thank you oh so much for pointing that out. Thanks for your time in reading this, I'll edit it. Fondly, -Renn

Limitless

So uhm, yes, this is weird. It doesn't have a specific flow/rythym exactly, but I think I kind of like it. 'Like' if you like it, please review it- I'm ...

To be honest, I really really liked this. From the beginning (the title) I expected something cliche and underwhelming. Thankfully and truthfully, your piece went beyond my expectations. This showed ...

I have no idea how to convey this other than "I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!" It made me laugh oh so very hard, and I approved of the crossed-out bits because ...

This was really good! It was lyrical and poetic without being cliche or unoriginal. We searched and searched for wings, for feathered appendages to lift us away, but we were ...