Rena0421

You say lake, I think John Mayer?

Hey. This was good but I won't lie, at first, I didn't understand it at all. It wasn't until someone said 'sex scene' that I was like...oh, he was drunk. ...

Nice. It was so short and to the point and packed with...umph? Yeah, umph. I like. Keep it up. -Rena-

Name: Rena0421 aka Rena(: Age: 16 Fav book: One Prayer Away Fav author: Kendra Norman-Bellamy, Harper Lee, Anias Nin, Sarah Dessen Fav food: chex mix original and animal crackers Fav ...

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First off, welcome to YWS! Nice having you(: Your poem was great, perfect, really. Nice job(: Keep up the good work.

This wasn't good at all, I'm sorry. It was crude and inappropriate for no good reason. And maybe it's just me but I didn't understand it at all. It was ...

Oh, wow, I've seen that one. 3/10. It wasn't too good and I feel asleep on it. Edward Scissorhands.

Since the only one I knew on the entire list was Over Thinking by Relient K, I'll give it a 2/10. 1.Rent-Rent Soundtrack. 2.Cream-Prince. 3.Let It Be-Across The Universe Soundtrack. ...

You say dead, I think heaven and hell

Hey, I'm Rena. First off, your title reminded me of The Fray as well and I was pulled in at once. I love that band. But back to the subject, ...

Well, really, everything that Kamas has said has covered it all. It was interesting how you described temptation and I enjoyed reading it. Recently, I've read the play, The Crucible, ...

Oh, nice idea. I'm going to try that. Thank you! Great idea, really. I never once thought of that. I feel dumb now but good thing we have you. Thank ...

I know, I've tried that much but I can't use that like a million times in a story. I think there should be a national way to get the message ...

As is yours very poetic. I like. 8/10. bravo.