Rena0421

Okay, this really has no title at all. I know it must really suck but I need it for a class but the deal is, I need it in spanish ...

Hi. I really liked this. I didn't think it was too descriptive or anything like that. It was perfect in that aspect. True, the title could use some editing itself ...

Hey! I'm Rena. Nice meeting you and welcome! We're all really nice here and you will have no problem fitting in at all. I'm like you in a few ways. ...

I'm Rena, hi to all. I can't say that I'm a new member because I'm not. Some of you may or may not know me but that's just fine. I'm ...

Once, in my English class, we had to write a 3 page short story so most of mine was like, the girl's thoughts or whatever and the entire story really ...

Um...there were those good parts in the story but for the better portion of the entire narrative, I was put to sleep. The characters are extremely flat and not well ...

Hey, This was very interesting. I liked how you retold the story and sort of gave the reader a recap of what happened earlier that night. The only thing that ...

Hey, Rena here. I don't have anything in regards of grammar or anything like that, more as interest. This was fairly interesting, I give you that. It makes me wonder ...

7.10-i liked the beat better than everything for some strange reason. and, trying again, my own.

funny. love him(: 8.10 found em one day and i love em. fave song on the album(:

uhhhh...thinking...pale face, thin body. dark brown hair. quirky smile. uncomfortable posture. small ears. thin mouth. dark brown eyes. this was so...detailed. i bet i'm not close at all, am i? ...

6.10 interesting but I don't really understand it. Mostly because I have yet to read the story itself.

yes! her name is Anias Adele. Anias from Anias Nin and Adele from the singer(: TUBM:runs a mile every morning for exercise.

you say My Super Sweet 16, I think sundae.

6.10 its cute(: