Rena0421

Hey! First off, you completely turned me off from the story by announcing that it was slow to start and that there isn't much in it. Don't do that! Don't ...

Hi, First off, I think you were going for a deeper meaning and understanding? It wasn't touching in any way, shape or form to be honest. Second off, I agree ...

Hey! I'm back for yet another critique. Now, I found a few simple errors in this particular piece. But all in all, very well done. I'm surprised to find someone ...

Well actually, I write all the time. Surprising to see that I have NOTHING posted here. But I'm more of a critique-r type thingy mabob. I don't know what you ...

First off, this is a cool assignment. Second off, Lia's memory was so sweet. Ah, I love your father for that and I don't even know him. Okay, my earliest ...

Hi, I'm Rena. I would just like to start off and tell you that this was very good. It was just as interesting. It was short and it was to ...

Hey, here for an extremely quick review. First off, As dismissal bell rang -As the dismissal bell rings. -You start in past tense ad quickly revert to resent for the ...

20 cool points award, I love Jack Johnson(: -Rena.

Raven, This was interesting. Maybe I'm looking too deeply into it all but this made me think. I had to think and figure out what you meant by it. But ...

l0l. thank you, Ayumi. You were extremely helpful. But its funny how everyone has a different translation. I was truly interesting to see how the Spanish version sounded against the ...

First off, for kids in school, don't let your quest to get 50,000 words interfere with your school work! Yes, it is very fun and intriguing to write that much ...

just finished listening to Human Nature-Michael Jackson and heading on down the MJ theme, I am not listening to Man in the Mirror(: my 2 faves by him. -Rena.

oh, gracias to all! Muy helpful[all I know is that ayudeme means help me??] l0l. Thanks you guys. -Rena.

I completely agree fhwdf, the show isn't accurate to the point. But besides that, I think I'm in love with it. When we learned about it in class and I ...

Hi, I'm Rena, First off, welcome to YWS. I'm sure that you'll be on the road to...good no time with a little constructive criticism. Actually, I'm not going to give ...