Rena0421

awwww. I could have cried at that. she killed herself. but anyways. good poem, nice flow and it sounded more like a short story than anything. But still, good poem, ...

Has anyone else read this book? It was hard to understand at points. And I'm just wondering, did the little kids have magical powers or was that just me not ...

Oh, I just noticed that you were a new member. Welcome. Actually, I'm a new member as well. And I am sure you've heard the rules a great number of ...

I almost chuckled when I was reading it. It was funny in a way. haha. Nothing to say you need to change right now though. I loved the quote boxes ...

Gracias, Senorita. I took it all into consideration.

Nice. I like how you had no punctuation. Made it an even better poem.

I understand Greek Mythology perfectly and this story was...interesting. Very detailed, I must say. You did a good job writing it, too. Keep up the good work. Haha, I want ...

I would only take the 'but' out of the last sentence. But it was good besides that one thing.

I like it. But what are they changing into? I want to read more. It's interesting.

You wrote it three years ago? So you were probably around eleven or so? It's good for an eleven year old. Nice work.

A while ago, I read a book, Sold by Patricia McCormick. She wrote the story in short stanzas. After I had read it I thought, ‘Hey, she can write however ...

This Lulllaby by Sarah Dessen. It could be classified as a romace. It had a love interest or two. And it is one of my favorites. If that counts for ...

I must say: 1. One Prayer Away by Kendra Norman-Bellamy. 2. Elisha's Bones by Don Hoesel 3. The Catcher in the Rye by J.D. Salinger 4. I would sat To ...

You had me at the beginning but with a cliffhanger ending....no. It makes me so mad when a book just leaves you hanging like that. I always want to read ...

ohhh, lala. When I was reading it, I was almost shouting the words: my, watch, I and you and by the end of the stanza, I was calming the voice ...