Rena0421

thanks. haha, like i said, written in less than three minutes. so thanks anyways. i'll take it all into consideration:)

I like it. It isn't too emo bit I think you have it in you. haha. Good poem, I liked the formate but who knows, it's 5 in the morning ...

explanation. I wrote. So can't firgure out the rhythm? Look how in every other line the last word rhymes? Well the lines between do not rhyme at all. I did ...

nice. i'm just not a HUGE fan of the color. but over all, 8/10.

fantasy like. cute. reminds me of some old barbie cartoon that came on nick for a while. l0l.

good. it was a little confusing but very poetic. maybe it was just me but i couldn't figure out what the poem was about. first i thought it was about ...

hey. I'm Rena. Nice intro. But I have to admit, I giggled a little. I thought it was supposed to be funny after you said 'It was all a joke." ...

Hi and Welcome. I'm Rena. I'm sure you'll love it here, I do. Nicve blogsite. Interesting. So I'll skip over the rules for now. It seems as if they've already ...

Awww. That's too funy. Where are you going but only for a week? And only to return and see us all in hell? That was cute, too. Haha, keep up ...

Whoa. Great story. The guy was sick and twisted and he knew it. But something about it didn't scream 'perv' to me. I don't know. It was so strange though ...

awwww. Good poem. It gave me the visual of an old village from like the 1700s with the church bells ringing. Or maybe around the 1800s. I don't know. But ...

It is a good poem but it's more of like a narrative. Towards the end you started cussing just suddenly and it sort of threw me off. Take some of ...

thanks. I already feel welcomed. I'm I'll fit right in...I hope. I know I've already sent a few people messages and some people have already PMed me. So yes, I ...

*brava*brava* Good Poem. That is all I can truly say now. Keep up the good work. No Critique.

Loved it It's a heart breaker though. The only problem was with the I'm near the end but someone has already touched bases on that one. I liked how the ...