Rena0421

I'm back! But was I ever really here? No, not really! But now that I've returned and have decided to take up a profession in creative writing, you will be ...

Thank you for sharing this and I'm sorry that this ever happened to you. You have my sympathies and you are extremely brave to write this. Amazing job, might I ...

Okay, thanks. I was saying that in one place you say they look alike but in another you're describing them and they don't seem to look alike at all. But ...

Same as you, I'm not homosexual but I hate that they can't get married! We should write poems and stories and make plays and create movies about this. I wonder ...

"Last Time" -Trey Songz. I Just Found It And I Love It So This Is About The 10000th Time Today.

Lady Gaga? Wow... When she first came out, I liked Just Dance. I liked Poker Face. And I liked the sample from Poker Face that she did for Kid Cudi, ...

What YWS means to me...Ha! Can I place the meaning into words? No, certainly not. I found the site years ago but lost it because I wasn't writing ANYTHING at ...

Hi, I agree with Conrad Rice in everything said. You are very good with detail. Seems to be a very strong pointer for you. But sometimes, detail doesn't always make ...

Hey, It was interesting and without a doubt, I'd continue reading it. It almost had a cliff hang-y effect to it at the end of every line that kept me ...

Hey, First off, the way you wrote it was...strange. I don't think I liked that too much. Skipping and double spacing where you thought it should go. That wasn't too ...

I'm back for yet a second review. Like the first one, this was very good. But unlike the first one, the lack of...dare i say 'adventure' was not good. In ...

Hello, For starters...what? Okay, five year old in school and let me get this right, she's hanging out with a ghost? Or is this her imaginary friend? I apologize for ...

Hey, welcome to YWS. I'm sure with the help of everyone here, you'll learn so many new things about poetry and writing. I'm sure you'll fit right in. Welcome and ...

I'm sure it rocks and all but...what language is this? But truly, I like the format. Makes me wish I understood it to read it. I wonder if this is ...

No, not at all. I don't like it one bit. Not in a harsh, cut-you-down-to-your-knees kinda way but a don't-write-dumb-short-prologues kinda way. You know what? Scratch all of that because ...