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Re: Hostage Ch. 1
Hello. I am a thirteen month old fledgling dragon. Yes, thirteen months means I am a year and one month old. Well, I am still at my mother's nest. That ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Just Another Family Torn
Hey there cat4prowl! I'm Rem and here to review your piece. :) I'm going to skip past nitpicks and such because you did great on grammar and spelling. I like ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Between the Moon and Stars - 1
The guilt was already taking over. I closed my eyes and tried to breathe deeply, steadily, but I still shook. His blood was everywhere – on my hands, clothes, face. ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Vermont's Young things
Hi mkglavin98! Welcome to YWS. (: Not many people are going to read this. If I were you, I would post each chapter separately. (Unless if they're reall short, like ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: The Takeoff - Chapter One
Taking this down for a while.
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: "Forbidden To Forsake" Chapter 1
Hi there LeanneWood, Rem here to review! (: A Plain cold breeze embraced the wood that gray winter day,seemed like the world was sick and pale. I think you mean ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: An endless dream
Hi there Writerchick! I'm going to review this for you. A quick note before I begin. You have a lot of grammar mistakes. There are lots of posts somewhere around ...
Dec 30, 2010 -
Re: Study Techniques
Soo... I'm not sure if this belongs here, but I wasn't sure where else to post it. Anywho, I was wondering what my fellow YWSers do to study? I'm looking ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Hey Pink! Could you please review a short piece that I'm working on right now? It's fantasy fiction. Morning Ride Thanks, Rem Thanks, Rem
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Morning Ride
So here's my first story (that I've posted), but it's also the first story I've written in a long, long time... so yeeaahhh , feel free to be as harsh ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Life Through the horses eyes.
Hi JenGwen! I'm Rem... I saw your story was about horses and I couldn't resist. (: So here goes. Hello, my name is Burnt Sienna and I am a nine ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: The Aenied
Hmmm... My teacher is always telling us to use gradesaver.com, so I typed in The Aenied and there's quizes, study guides, and summaries, if that helps. (:
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: A Painted Ponies Story
Hey there Rose! I'm Rem, and I'm giving you the honor of my first review. ;) I agree with everybody else, but there are some things aside from nitpicks that ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Algebra II again....
Ooh, ok. Thanks Snoink! So if you were going to solve this, it would look like 100=.16d^2 and you would solve for d by dividing 100/.16 (which equals 625) and ...
Nov 16, 2010 -
Re: Algebra II again....
The are A in square feet of a projected picture on a movie screen is given by A=o.16d (squared) where d is the distance from the projector to the screen ...
Nov 16, 2010
