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I just find it so ironic that now, of all times, I get a reply. I must remember to post controversial/snippy remarks all the time :wink: And yeah, I don't ...

Um, to be honest I'm not sure if either of those posts were helpful, though the first was obviously well-meant and I appreciate that. I mean, since I wrote the ...

With the worn feeling of Monday I’m sitting here, crying my eyes out over my Father- the Impresario- and my Mother- the Manic Depressive. The crying is actually internal because ...

Rural landscape steams by; smoke sticks to the glass, Too quiet here for noise or fuss. Or shallow thought. Lawn laid out like a thousand picnic spreads, 'Cept now your ...

Let me start off with a couple of punctuation corrections. They acted happy around me, but that was just it; an act I think it's meant to be a colon ...

The description is good and I'd like to read more. One thing: you might consider varying the sentences in the beginning. Sometimes too many sentences starting with "the" or "she" ...

Flower heads fell, decapitated, into the dark green pool to sit crystalline on the surface, along her legs, through her hair. It was a dense muteness overpowering the clammy cold ...

The first line is borrowed from a Midsommer Night's Dream. Being in night, all this is but a dream, Too flattering-sweet to be substantial. Harsh dawn keeps distance enough to ...

I wrote this while we were studying the play Blood Brothers in drama. Hopefully you'll get something of the story in what I've written. It's meant to be a character/plot ...

I'm not sure if it's what you were going for but I like the lack of punctuation as the poem continues. The lengthy sentence at the end that's broken up ...

Um, I don't really know what to do on here. By that I mean where to start. It's been at least 2 years since I was on boards (properly). Anyway, ...

It doesn't take many words to express how you feel. Like a birthday card, The message is already printed. It's short but it means somebody cares. But I'm not good ...