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Thanks for all the feedback, yeah when i read what you said about the homonyms, i was all "damn, i really wasn't paying attention." and sorry if it was confusing, ...

Ok, be gentle.....

No, to be honest, this was just a sit-down blabby blab thing. I dont think i will expand on this at all. It was just a thought. By the way, ...

i jus rote this... I have had a ton of trouble sleeping for the last... three years.... dunno why. but lately (this week) i've gotten no sleep in the small ...

Hey thanks! yeah as i was re reading it for the first time, i was like, wow, the conflict here is like... non existent... well i guess that whole college ...

neer neer, buahaha .. are you confused? OK so this was an assigned response to the novel Invisible Man, and I wonder if I got a little carried away... ahh, ...

Oh man! OHMAN! Thanks for the advice! but if it makes you feel better, one of those commas in that one sentence should have been a question mark (?) so ...

Ok yeah, I figured it would be best for me to start by posting my oldest and my (perceived) worst piece, so it's nothing special, just an over extended analogy ...