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Thanks for all the feedback, yeah when i read what you said about the homonyms, i was all "damn, i really wasn't paying attention." and sorry if it was confusing, ...

Ok, be gentle.....

“Hey…what am I doing Armless?” Cru held out his hands inquisitively for a moment and then scratched the bald spot under his headband. “You’re getting a knife.” Jess leaned forward ...

No, to be honest, this was just a sit-down blabby blab thing. I dont think i will expand on this at all. It was just a thought. By the way, ...

i jus rote this... I have had a ton of trouble sleeping for the last... three years.... dunno why. but lately (this week) i've gotten no sleep in the small ...

Did you know that the number one cause of insomnia in normal functioning teenagers and adults is thought? It’s true, scientific research proves that nearly 70 percent of people who ...

Hey thanks! yeah as i was re reading it for the first time, i was like, wow, the conflict here is like... non existent... well i guess that whole college ...

neer neer, buahaha .. are you confused? OK so this was an assigned response to the novel Invisible Man, and I wonder if I got a little carried away... ahh, ...

I am a mirror trick. Most generally, when people think of the phenomenon of a person vanishing into thin air, magic certainly is considered first and for most. In fact, ...

whoa man, whoa. your line work is really amazing, especially for the Hansel and Gretel house; the line variation was perfect. I would have just hoped you would have done ...

Hey there! I hope you recognize this is not the first time I've read this poem. This is a very moving poem, and i love the way you made you ...

Oh man! OHMAN! Thanks for the advice! but if it makes you feel better, one of those commas in that one sentence should have been a question mark (?) so ...

Ok yeah, I figured it would be best for me to start by posting my oldest and my (perceived) worst piece, so it's nothing special, just an over extended analogy ...

Walks of Life You don’t stop; not ever. You keep on walking, forward, and you have to. Even if you are exhausted, your body weighted, you mind even heavier, your ...

While i was aware of what was occurring throughout the story, I have to say I like the way the reader does not know exactly what happened until they have ...