Rekuen

Ok, I might miss a couple mistakes but I'm trying to be as thorough as possible. I had a dream one night and woke up inspired to put as much ...

My name is Delihla Bee. I try to pretend my family is at least semi-normal and some of the time it works! But other times... well it's a living- hell, ...

How depressing. It's going to fall off the page without a review. D: Come on, guys, it's stand-alone. Also, I edited a bit.

Note: Here is a link to the first chapter, although this chapter can definitely be read without the first, since it introduces a different character, Isaac. -------------------------------------------

I really like it. However, I was a little jarred by the sudden change of pace halfway through and a few things that didn't really make sense. I realize that ...

Aw, only one review? :(

Wow this was beautiful and entertaining. I have to say that your title really caught my eye which is always a big thumbs up when writing. Your characters were very ...

The tent was so dark inside that at first she wasn’t sure she had even opened her eyes. Somewhere in the distance an insect buzzed softly and then faded into ...

I really like it. I like the end, how she eased into silence. But the crash wasn't described well enough, and this seems more like a short story then a ...

I like how you describe the scene, but found it a little jarring how there is a new paragraph almost every line. Most of those can be combined, and if ...

The northern sky was a dull uninteresting gray all the way to the horizon, where low banks of swirling clouds collected around the distant mountain peaks. Lena shivered slightly and ...

I like your writing style, but I think a much longer story full of similar entries would get boring rather fast. You need some sort of a "hook" to keep ...

[in the process of editing, please ignore, thanks]