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Re: Animalsim
This is a very interesting premise indeed! I'm guessing you have some bad experience with one of the organizations you've mentioned? I think you could have explained a little more ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: The Introduction Of My Novel :) - Serpent Riddle
Looking at this selection at face value, I think I see what it was that got you a good amount of the negative comments from PhoenixBishop. It looks like you're ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: "Escape from Loredaen Hall" Prologue: Poisoned
I like the use of Gaelic. :) I'm really wondering just if the translations were necessary, if maybe they could be left up the the reader's imagination. I know that ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Green tree chapter three - hey that rhymes :)
These are some good characters you've developed. :) I like that line about the swine flu, that *was* a nice touch. I also like the way you've blended all these ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: The Elemental Quest - The Immortal Seven (Chp 1 & 2)
Esmé brings up a good point that I wanted to address upon reading this. I like the ideas that you're giving us, but since all it is is backstory, perhaps ...
Apr 9, 2010