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I am currently conducting research for a proposal asssignment. My topic is creating a workshop or a similar program for youth aged 16-25. As many of us are in that ...

Very funny. And I'm impressed, Jack. Even a lot of Canadians don't know that.

No medals for Israel. Boo hoo. :( This is proof positive of why the Summer games are better. Or proof why desert countries are a little out of place in ...

oh yeah! When women won the gold, res was full of excitement. I watched a full game of hockey for the first time. It wasn't that I loved the game. ...

I wrote that before I knew how the men were doing.

Repetition isn't always a bad thing. Heck, so much of traditional story-telling is full of repetition. They also appear to lack depth unless you know to look for it. Metephorically ...

Yeah, it's really funny how much disguised swearing there is in his plays.

Generally I would agree that changing the word is necessary, but in this case it fits. The word you chose fits the language of the culture and using a different ...

Wow. That was very well done. Simple and elegant, with a really nice concept.

Thought I'd finally let everyone know what I look like. The guy in the picture is Mike, the one I'm talking about when I refer to the unicorn, and also ...

It's not likely that I will write this as an actual novel, or even a longer short story. It was just meant to be a little fairy tale for the ...

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Yes, it was a bit rushed, but if you slow down and give us a nothing few minutes to get to know the characters before the conflict gets going. it ...

I really enjoyed the tone of this poem. It was very honest and very real without being angsty in an annoying way. The rhyme was also used very well. The ...

I think I'll have to second that. I can't give any suggestions or really pieces of critizism, so I'll just say that it was very funny.