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Why would I fall in love with Gregory when I've got a perfectly good Mike in this room, wearing nothing but Superman boxers?

"You're licking that off, you know." Let your imagination run wild. Winkwink

YAY! Group hug!

I'm not too sure if I liked the ending or not, but I think it did suit your purposes. This is pretty good. Could use some revisions, but I have ...

It seems like a skeleton of a beginning, like a detailed outline with the dialogue. It really needs more details, particularly visual. A slight, dark man sat in a corner, ...

Don't you know that I already have a true love?

Aren't you a little young for me?

Nothing to see here

I think all writers are a bit crazy. Though the real word is eccentric. I do have a sort of soundtrack for the book I'm writing now. It's a non-fiction ...

Wouldn't you cure it like any infectious disease, with antibiotics?

Very beautiful. I never thought an umbrella could be so poetic. The only thing I didn't like, though it was hardly a problem, was that the second two stanza has ...

Don't you know that typhoid is curable and you will not die?

wow . . . Someone who is worse than me. Honestly, Sharty, if you ar being sincere, grow up.

Aw, I know this was posted a long time ago and is pretty much irrelevant, but . . . . aw!

Is Gazza going to get typhoid now?