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No, no, no. It's not the dingos that eat babies. Everyone knows its Werewolves.

Yeah, this didn't get to me either. I need a reason to care, but there is none. Like Karma said, it was detatched. These are pretty high teenage emotions, and ...

That's a good fact for me to know, Sab. Thanks.

*shakes head* I never did finish this book.

Thanks, guys. It's nice to know that sometimes, I am capable of writing something people like.

Check out my article on novel-writing. There are a bunch of suggestions of how to do chapters. There's a link to it in List of Articles. For ending the story ...

Thanks a lot. I'm happy you like it. I'll be posting the next chapter soon.

This is a concept actors often use as well. Someone in my acting class had some difficulty grasping the emotional content of his monologue in his first performance, but in ...

Hmm . . . Sounds tricky, but definitely a good thing to try to give your writing a little more variety to it.

Definitely a good idea. Having a hard copy of the review is much easier to work from, especially when correcting spelling errors and such.

Well, you're way ahead of a lot of people. Fifteen still is pretty young. Welcome to the society!

I definitely enjoyed reading this. The rhythm was really fun to read, and the rhymes were very well chosen. I usually don't like an inconsistent rhyming scheme, but this worked.

Depends on what kind you buy, really. Cocoa puffs, sure, but not others. Besides, milk doesn't suddenly have less calcuim just because you had chocolate syrup to it.

Cornwall, Ontario, Canada! YAY!

This has some very powerful images, expressing the pain of war. I enjoyed reading it very much. I only have a few brief comments. In your first stanza, I didn't ...