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Fair enough. I just think this kind of information is more interesting if it is weaved into the story, rather than given before the story begins. But the way you've ...

Bjorn, we should have high expectations. I'd suggest perhaps expanding on this, and playing around with the ideas more. There really isn't much here for a reader to latch onto. ...

If you were replying to me, where did I say that? I was talking about cencorship in general. My point was that it's fine as long as it does not ...

Depending on what type of country you want your story set in, and what era, the fuedal system of government would also be something to consider looking into. Of course, ...

Guess what! I'm finally getting around to reading this. I'll be commenting on it one chapter at a time, though. My attention span is not so good. So here are ...

As usual, your writing is very beautiful. You've got lots od very nice ideas. At the same time, it's so obscure that the meaning behind the words escape me.

This is going a bit overboard, I think. Why bother messing with these cartoons. Because that is all they are. Cartoons. Sure, seeing stuff like this on TV and in ...

Yeah, if I didn't go to the library once a week, I would run out of things to read very quickly.

Wow, didn't realize there were so many of us. I'm probably the main reason Canada has been the most actove country in the last few days.

Since it's only a beginning, I can't say much about it. It did catch my attention. I'll probably check it out once you've posted the whole thing.

Well, guess I just get a "Congrats for trying." This was very impressive! You really expanded well on the original prompt. I see what CL means by Fern Gully on ...

Very elegant. It is very easy to read. The words just flow off my tougue. Great work!

Not too bad, once I knew what it meant. Though I'm not too sure if German is a good language for haiku. To my hears, German does not sound half ...

Agreed. I got one of the books in the series for my boyfriend's birthday. He imediately went o buy another one and finished them both in less than two weeks.

I'm with David. Still don't like the stick figures. Also, I severely dislike having Squills articles there instead of the most recent literary posts. The literary posts are supposed to ...