Rei

Did I say that there was treasure in the bucket?

Do you know where my bucket is?

You've got some nice atmosphere and tone here. All the words were well chosen for the effect I think you were going after. It held my attention well, and I ...

How was I supposed to know on line?

Can you?

Is it so hard to tell that she was saying that she thought I said it was wrong for someone to say they like it, not that there is anything ...

I felt the opposite way that Kepe did about the whole "I'm a ninja" bit. It felt silly in an unnecessary way. You have some very nice descriptive details at ...

YAY! *feels inadequate because she can't get beyond 40K even when she's not cramming and rushing*

And what does that have to do with the fire or my bucket?

School magazines would not really count. There is far less competition, so it doesn't necessarily mean you are anything special. And all you really need to do to check out ...

Aren't you supposed to be able to read my mind?

Doesn't anyone realize that I need that bucket to carry water to a fire?

I have one problem with this poem in the way it sounds. Yes, it does need some visuals, you know, "Show, don't tell." But what stood out for me is ...

A fairy tale is, in most cases, a fantasy that follows certain conventions. Those conventions do come out of sources like what the Grimm's published, and what the author of ...

I dunno. Can we write enough things to get that many reviews?