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I think what you need with this is a better grasp on who the character is. There needs to be a reason he ends up this way. Maybe if you ...

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Isn't that what we're looking for the bucket for?

Super-dooper-uber excited! Though part of me is amazed I even got in considering who chose them.

Welcome, welcome. I think most of us have that problem about finishing things at one time or another. BTW, t hanks for the comment on my story. However, don't assume ...

I like your writing style, but I think a much longer story full of similar entries would get boring rather fast. You need some sort of a "hook" to keep ...

You're totally right, Cade. Study what you're interested in. You shouldn't be stuck with a job you don't like. If you can avoid it. However, being finished with school, I ...

You rock, Nate! This is the coolest thing.

This is all going to be reworked. I'm determined to make this a journal, but it's a lot harder than I thought it would be.

YAY for Canadians winning American awards

Also, something that an author I met once said, when I was telling him about my creative writing class, said that the last thing you want to study is writing ...

This game is dumb.

When were these letters there?

I think all the technical stuff I noticed has been pointed out. This piece was cute. WHat I think it needed was something more to clarify that this elephant was ...

It still needs some more spacing out. Every time you would hit tab, leave a space between the paragraphs instead. it's still pretty awkward to read. And you should have ...