Rei

I'm writing stories set at college right now. Since I have no imagination for real life events and have a somewhat limited experience, I want to hear all of your ...

This didn't really make much sense to me. What point were you trying to make? WHy was the speaker proud? And what does this have to do with the otehr ...

You're supposed to post reviews before you post your own work.

Can I choose my happy pills?

That was just the giggle I needed, yoyo!

You've got a nice descriptive style. I can't really comment further since this is a random bit in the middle of the story. Try posting it from the beginning, maybe ...

In Canada, there are lots of publishers out there that don't require an agent. But it's true, they do look at the ones supported by an agent first. On most ...

I agree. It is completely method acting. Certainly, I have an easier time writing about relatively innocent teenage girls, but in one of my books, said teenage girl is being ...

What can I choose?

I love Bob. Truly. While I'm sooo excited, I'm also feeling slightly sad/stupid that I didn't submit anything this time 'round, and as such am hoping that I may have ...

Isn't what?

Is that something you can really choose?

2/10 for saying my awesome siggie was only okay.

Isn't it obvious?

I'm with hekate girl about the paragraph that she intrducer herself in. The best exposition is worked in subtly throughout the action or in dialogue. You could have Isabella tell ...