Rei

7/10 Not sure why

Well, I'm hoping to make a career out of my writing, so it is relevant to me. I'd rather go through a respected Canadian publisher. Anyway, that's for a different ...

Yeah, rejection letters are either very impersonal or include a small piece of polite feedback. They would never say, "This is crap." Even if it is, so some really bad ...

Good to know that you're aware of it. Thanks, Nate.

True, Nate, although I've heard that publishers don't like to publish works that have been posted online. I originally heard it was because the sites might claim copyright or something, ...

Oh, yeah, this really draws you in. I know a bunch of people thought it was fiction when they read it, but the way you wrote it, I could tell ...

I stopped after the first couple of paragraphs for one reason. In the second paragraph, you introduce a random "him." I have never seen this done effectively unless "He" is ...

7/10 Very clever moment in that story.

My one issue with this is the rhyming. You've got a fair rhyming scheme at the beginning, and the words are reasonable well chosen, but it drops off less than ...

3/10 promoting your work in your sig

This is kind of silly. Way too long for me to bother looking at the whole thing.

That ending was just plain silly. But oddly appropriate. I got a very clear picture of what was going on and the people around the campfire. It had perfect pace ...

For sure. I was so excited when I saw the preview in the theatre! Since then, I've watched the other three movies twice. He's so gorgeous!

I'll for sure try. It's harder when you don't read much poetry.

Woah, you really gotta reformat this. Break up the lines so we can see the rhythm in it. Otherwise, it's just a jumbled mess.