Rei

I do it because it's who I am. Stories are what I do. Even when I'm not writing, I tell stories. When people ask me qestions, or I want to ...

Didn't like it. It was way to straight forward. Why put fairy tale in the title if you won't expand on that metephore? Draw on fairy tales to show us ...

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The best thing to do is to listen to people. Learn about how different types of people talk, and all the dialects of the English langauge. Learn how a person's ...

My suggestion. Don't worry about doing something that is overdone. If it is done well, it won't matter. Think of a story that means something special to you. What are ...

It's an okay start. If you really let yourself delve into this it could become a decent story. Give more details. There was not nearly enough to create a good ...

I've just read Coraline. Not bad, though I prefer is short stories and poetry.

I dunno. I just thought it went way to quickly. Give us time to really get to know your characters. Take your time. The dialogue could be adjusted too, so ...

I've never actually read much of his work, but I loved what little that I have. you know, little bits in anthologies, and things. I think North American culture doesn't ...

Summer hides away I wish I could hide with it It's healing warmth The painless freedom But in one week's time I'll go back to the battlefield That nearly killed ...

Sorry Nate. Silly Brad. I never asked you to shut up. How American of you to twist things so they make you look like the better person even when you're ...

Peronally, I think it's way too long a time to go without dialogue. Have stuff happen. Get into the action. Show us that this is what's it's like. Don't just ...

I stand at my donation box, ready for an evening of jokes and enthusiastic theatre-goers. I am in a very strange mood today. This is the last time I will ...

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It's okay. Nothing particular jumped out at me. However, "For to avoid" That makes so sense if you read it with the next line.