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I think the best way to describe this, to use theatre language, would be that you've got several beats all rolled into one. This is way to fast. I couldn't ...

It's got some wonderful imagery in it. I like your choice of theme. But it seemed to be missing something. Play around with the idea a little more. Expand on ...

Look at what DarkerSarah said.

Actually, bra size has nothing to do with it. It's just the part of my body that shows people that I haven't just started puberty. In Toronto, we use child ...

Actually, I'm more of a Celt, you know, the people who lived in Ireland before the Christians. Wiccans actually don't have anything to do with faeries. I do have Irish ...

I dunno. i think you kind of loose something if you don't do it by hand firstl. All of the ebst books I've ever read, of the ones where I ...

Why don't you let the characters decide? Do they really want to be together? is that the best thing for them? What is in the way of them ending up ...

Hi fellow scribes. This is Helen Rachel Baumander, otherwise known as the pixie girl. That's right. I am decended from the Fair Folk. I honestly and truely believe that. Care ...

A/N This is a expansion of Little Girl/Not a Little Girl The Moment the pixies saw the little girl sitting at the edge of the school yard, huddled,, shaking and ...

The only thing I didn't like about it was the lack of punctuation and capitalization. To me, it just seems really pretentious and arrogant to not use those, as if ...

Me like. Definitely kept me interested. The dialogue was great. Very believable, which is a rare thing on sites like this. And I think you really did succeed in your ...

It was kind of dull, really. Not much about it hooked me. There were no characters, and little promise for a real story.

I am working on my first picture book, which I am going to send to a local publisher. Anyone got any suggestions of how to go about writing picture books? ...

This is called a prose poem. It does not need to be put into stanzaz, and it was written this way on purpose.

I think it is necessary to have some degree of planning, but it should not be followed too closely. Allow yourself to discover new things. You may latch on to ...