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The problem with self-publishing is that it costs a lot of money. Could be thousands of dollars. And you have to market and distribute the books yourself. Whereas, sending a ...

Woah! Relax. First of all, I'm sorry I said something that had been said already, but I didn't know. I don't read other people's replies when I write my own. ...

So true. I think the thing that makes much of his work so special is that he uses contemporary, social realism and mixes it with ancient lore and mythology. So ...

I really like the passages in italics. Good images, and all right choice of words. The other sections leave something to be desired. The first two sentences, for example. Far ...

my suggestion. Don't stress about it. Just write the story while keeping an awareness of what the characters' relationships are. Afterwards, if you still see the problem you feel you ...

Oh grow up, Crysi. A lot of female mammals, of not all, go through that stage. And so will YOU.

I definitely wish I could have been able to write that well when I was 8. But I definitely encourage you to rework this. You could have a decent picture ...

I definitely enjoyed reading this. All your facts are accurate and were put into the story at the right point. My only problem with this is the name of your ...

I thought it was dull as anything. It seemed like you were trying to be mysterious at the beginning, but it didn't work, nor does there appear to be any ...

Very Impressive, dreaming mouse. I haven't been able to get even close to that length yet. So far my longest has been just shy of 40 thousand words. However, with ...

I was simply pointing out that most fanfiction realy doesn't belong here because in most cases, to properly understand the stories, one must have a familiarity with the game/manga/anime that ...

Recently, I attended a discussion of Canadian children's authors, illustrators, and book sellers on the genre that is generally categorized as Young Adult or teen fiction. One of the book ...

You'd be surprized what you can make interesting. But I do see what you mean. That being the case, I would suggest putting the entire episode into a very short ...

It's just that I'm not really sure what you mean when you say "I just want to know how to get her from being in the car going somewhere to ...

Good detail with the horse. I got a really good picture of your character, where she was riding, as well as the connection she has with the horse. But you ...