Rei

This looks like a quick character sketch rather than the story itself, but I liked it. You've got a good balance between showing and telling, as well as action, exposition, ...

Hey, In most parts of Canada, we can get snow in April. This isn't so bad. Though I do remember that last year I was fighting with students about keeping ...

aww! I couldn't eat them now!

August 30, 2008 It took a bus, the subway, the train, a cab, and more than six hours, but we are finally here in our hotel room in Cornwall. Mom, ...

Some people say it dragged a bit, I didn't feel it dragged enough, if that makes any sense at all. In something set in a graveyard, you have the perfect ...

Very nice, Nate.

Kokobeans has a point about accents when it comes to rhyming. Anyway, I'm in a good mood so I shall not be as cruel as Suz was. It was amusing. ...

The drawing is pretty good, but I couldn't read the words. They were a bit too small.

I agree with the previous comment about the last line. Saying you're off to pass it makes it a little more optomistic than it should me, I think.

Remind me to take away any sugar you have.

I think what you need here is to be a lot more visual. The first stanza is great. Try to do the same thing with the rest of the poem.

Hello, my name is Fairy Beery, but you can call me Febe. I hide my wings with a sweat suit, and I brought beer to the human race.

Hee hee hee. Lolcats are the best.

I wonder if anyone will get that many red stars. 1250 is a lot.

You've got some beautiful narrative here. However, I have to agree with KJ about it being unclear. It was so vague, it's very hard to tell exactly what's going on.