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Really fascinating. It's one of those few cases where being vague and mysterious actually worked for me. I did guess pretty quickly what it was, but that didn't making me ...

Where was the story here? Your first scenes need to be a little longer to establish who these characters are, and what the relationships are. I think what you also ...

It's okay, though I didn't feel like you captured the feelings properly.

I hate to repeat myself, but for the most part, everything people have said before still applies here. What you need is more details, more information, more images, and it's ...

The Grudge is probably one of if not the only time where the american version was better than the Japanese version of a movie. But then again, it had the ...

I'm not offended. Just annoyed that you can't accept the fact that you didn't make hur injury enough to be realistic. I know its a long way from now, but ...

The fact that you used the word stupid proves to me that you might need a slight attitude adjustment. I never used that word, nor was I trying to change ...

Do you people even read what I type? That's what I said. She was fifteen and sixteen when she wrote it, which is one of the reasons I considered it ...

What were you bloody thinking when you posted this?

You really need to adjust your attitude, darkmoon. Listen to what people tell you and think about it. Such a minor injury is not that dramatic, and it is unrealistic ...

You're so cool, writersdomain! Rock on!

It's really very bland. For one thing, you make statements but don't back them up.

MMM. Pie.

I once heard a story about a boy who got suspended for saving his friend's life. The boy was having a severe asthma attack and his friend gave him his ...

I have two choices: The Lord of the Rings: Because of the way it has influenced so many people's lives, and inspired so many writers and artists. How it revived ...